Rum told me to redraw it from the sketch he was working on and this is almost exactly what I corrected. Basically a bit less symbolism and a bit more semi-realism. Good eye Red!
If it was me, I'd make the eyebrows and goatee smaller, but then again, my style is one that leans a little more towards realistic appearance (as much as pointy eared, gray skinned, forked tailed women are "realistic", hurp-durp) and I know that style is to be preserved as much as possible. So thats why I just left it at that and focused on the pecs.
Hahahahahahahahaha really now! I'm gonna post the one I sent him few days ago, it's (excluding the beard) very close to your description.
Oh you should. I'd love to see it dude!