Something is off and I can't put my finger on it. I would've had her looking down at the guy and covering his mouth personally, but that's me. Who knows? Maybe there's someone in front of her that she needs to kill next?I think what's messing me up is the blade. I've never felt that holding a blade upside down makes for good "outward" slashes. It's just not productive or easy. If you turn the blade around inward, then it's easier to feel like she pulled the blade up. But if that's the case, she wouldn't need to pull her arm so far up. I think the last thing that's throwing me off is her chest. It's too dead on with the view and there's no sense of pull with her arms. Like her arms are doing all the work and she's not putting her weight into the movement.I'm going to have to take this image and draw over it because it's sort of hard to put it all out in words. Movement and action are hard enough to draw as it is.